DIAMANTE POEM
Hi! Hi! This is Chan Song again!!
Today I made a poem.
but it's not JUST poem, it's diamante poem.
Diamante poem is diamond shape and have nouns, adjectives, and verbs.
And there are synonym diamante and antonym diamante.
I made it both of it first is "Parents & Me" and second is "GLPS".

Brilliant work, Chan Song! You effectively chose words for each synonym and antonym poems :) I especially liked the Parents & Me poems. Still, you can improve your synonym poem even more. I think you wanted to express your ambivalent opinion toward the camp. (Having an ambivalent opinion means that you have two different opinions on a same object, such as feeling both enjoyment and stress about GLPS) Maybe your poem could have been better if you change one of the two words (Strict, Hard) into positive word, such as "rewarding". Great work :)
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