LOVE OF LVC
Hello! It's Chan Song Park again!!
Today I made a story, called love of LVC.
The genre is romance, and me Chan Song Park made it.
OK. So here I start!!
Once in small country, there lived 3 people called LVC,
because their name was Luscious, Viona, Clarence.
They were best friends, they always do together like team.
They eat together, play together, talk together all the time.
Time passed and Viona grows up in to beautiful young lady.
She had blond hair, white teeth and skin, big eye, and also cheerful mind.
As time passed Luscious and Clarence grows up into handsome young men.
Luscious had brown skin, because he liked to go outdoor and hunt animals.
Clarence had white skin because he liked indoor activity,
such as cooking, reading, and writing.
The both handsome young men proposed to Viona at once.
Luscious hunt animals everyday and told fun stories to Viona.
Clarence made song and poem to Viona and give cookies to her everyday.
They both wanted to marry with her...
Click here for ending 1
Click here for ending 2
Click here for ending 3
As I read through your story, I did not expect to have such three endings. They were at once unique and hilarious. :) However, you could have explained more on the details of each story. You could have depicted more on each character's thoughts and emotions. For example, you can change the sentence "Luscious and Clarence got mad" in ending 1 to "For days, Luscious and Clarence sat still in their houses, refusing any food or water for days and cursing Viona for not marrying them." Still, you are the first one to end the story, and I like the uniqueness of three endings. :)
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